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Karina Laigo



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PostSubject: Graditute Rough Draft   Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:41 pm

As November rolls by and Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all that we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that doesn’t cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10
I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today , no matter what situations I’m put through , they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10
I’m thankful to be Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

”I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family and they are what gets me through the day.”
Billy Roberts 12

Thankful that I live in the U.S than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat everyday.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster…
Indira Bedjo 11

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jasminewu



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Tue Nov 09, 2010 2:03 am

As November rolls by and Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all that <what> we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that doesn’t cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10

I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today , <insert ...>no matter what situations I’m put through, they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10

I’m thankful to be Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

”I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family and they are what gets me through the day.” <Take out the quote marks unless you plan on inserting them throughout the article; keep it consistent.>
Billy Roberts 12

<[I'm]> Thankful that I live in the U.S than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat every day.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster.
Indira Bedjo 11
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jasminewu



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:53 am

And another note: it's "gratitude," not "graditute."
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Karina Laigo



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:59 pm

As November rolls by and Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all what we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that doesn’t cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10

I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today...no matter what situations I’m put through, they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10

I’m thankful to be Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family and they are what gets me through the day.
Billy Roberts 12

I'm Thankful that I live in the U.S than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat every day.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster.
Indira Bedjo 11

I'm thankful for my growing family, my health and my friends.
Mrs. Casey English Teacher
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courtneyhang



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:33 am

As November rolls by and <the> Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all what we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that doesn’t <don't> cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help<comma> because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10

I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today...no matter what situations I’m put through, they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10

I’m thankful to be Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family and they are what gets me through the day.
Billy Roberts 12

I'm Thankful<not capitalized> that I live in the U.S <U.S., rather> than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat every day.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster.
Indira Bedjo 11

I'm thankful for my growing family, my health<comma> and my friends.
Mrs. Casey English Teacher
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Karina Laigo



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Thu Nov 11, 2010 1:13 am

As November rolls by and the Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all what we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that don't cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help, because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10

I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today...no matter what situations I’m put through, they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10

I’m thankful to be Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family and they are what gets me through the day.
Billy Roberts 12

I'm thankful that I live in the U.S, rather than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat every day.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster.
Indira Bedjo 11

I'm thankful for my growing family, my health, and my friends.
Mrs. Casey English Teacher
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Grace Song



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Fri Nov 12, 2010 4:11 pm

i think her name is Joeanne Sung, not Joanne Sung
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edwardchao



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:49 pm

As November rolls by and the Thanksgiving holiday is on the horizon, we need to take a step back and realize all <of> what we’re happy and thankful for. Besides the Christmas presents or the late nights spent playing games, we need to refocus on the fact that there are gifts that we receive that don't cost any money and that the best gifts don’t come in boxes.

I'm thankful for being able to help, because a good deed a day keeps the world from decay!
Willy Liang 10

I’m thankful for my friends because without them I wouldn't be who I am today... <i think you should separate this into two different sentences here> no matter what situations I’m put through, they're always the ones who build me up from my lowest points.
Jaycee Hinahon 10

I’m thankful to be <[in]> Colorguard because they’re a big family to me and we’ve all been through a lot together. Though I’ve only been in Colorguard for a couple of months, I’m really thankful that everyone is there for each other.
Catherine Huang 9

I transferred to Arcadia High my junior year, and I am thankful for coming here... Compared to my previous school, I am much happier with all the friends, activities, and opportunities.
Britney Papa 12

I’m thankful for Apache News because they're like my family <,> and they are what gets me through the day.
Billy Roberts 12

I'm thankful that I live in the U.S, rather than a second world country because there are less fortunate people out there <,> and I’m lucky enough to even have a house over my head and food to eat every day.
Joanne Sung 10

I’m thankful for shelter, because it protects me from rain and any other disaster.
Indira Bedjo 11

I'm thankful for my growing family, my health, and my friends.
Mrs. Casey English Teacher


shouldn't all the things said by the people be placed in between quotes?
and shouldn't there be a comma in between the student/teacher and their grade/profession?
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edwardchao



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PostSubject: Re: Graditute Rough Draft   Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:44 pm

ARTICLE TITLES

"Grateful Gratitude"

"What Are You Grateful For?"
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